The Official Writing Challenge
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So sad for Tom to have to go through all of that, only to find he'd had what he'd really been searching for all the time, a family who loved him and taught him about the One who could fill the emptiness. Thanks for sharing.
07/09/09
It is a terrible thing to exist through life, searching and not finding the One who bore their loneliness and grief. I'm glad Tom found Jesus at the end. I'm glad he shared the gospel with others.
Indeed, no one is out of reach of God's mercy! I'm very glad that Tom sought and found, and surrendered his remaining few years of his life to the Saviour Jesus Christ!
07/09/09
This is a nice story,and I'm glad he found Jesus at the end.
This writing kept my interest from beginning to the end. Very well-written. A story to wake up any individual to the truths of God's Words and the importance of those words in his own life.
07/14/09
This fits so many people I know and many of us know thank you for writing it.
07/15/09
This is a story to which so many can sadly relate. In reading your story, I was surprised you are not in a more advanced level. I did notice your lack of using punctuation where I think it is needed. Other than that, you have a very good entry. Very inspirational. Laura