The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed your little retreat. Thanks for sharing it with us. Isn't it neat that God gave us minds that can take us anywhere. Good imagery used to describe the sights and surroundings in your retreat.
Blessings,
Rose
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing your special place with me this morning!
08/08/05
I loved this the first I read this morning. What a day this will be.
Great entry! God bless ya, littlelight
08/08/05
Very serene and refreshing.
08/09/05
"I know what to do and I know how to do it." What a great and glorious feeling after dealing with uncertainty & doubt. Thank you for giving me that tonight as I deal with so many things. I needed to remember that when things seem darkest, He already knows the outcome and will provide for me.

Pauly
08/09/05
Beautiful! Very well written!
Amen! This is beautiful. Refreshment for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
08/11/05
Wow. First one I have read on this level, and am blown away - thanks, great work.
Loved the imagery of the places God takes you. What a wonderful way to spend time with our Lord-Think I will give it a try!
08/11/05
It was a lovely trip, from start to finish. Excellent work.
This is so beautiful and refreshing. Great imagery. I could almost feel as though I was there. You are a talented writer. Keep up the good work. God bless you.
Very nicely done! I appreciate your explanations of the retreat varying according to circumstances: "Here is the gate; today it is of old wood, heavily gnarled and dark like the under belly of the earth. The latch is wooden too. The last time I came here, the gate was a stone portal, and maybe the next time it will be different again, or the same as it is now."
08/13/05
Very nice - the image of the pot and the butterflies was really nice.
Very well-written! I think this is even better than some intermediate entries I've read. Keep on writing! You'll go far! God bless.
I meant to write your article is even better than some of the "advanced" entries I read this week. Keep going!
Wow! You did an excellent job here of describing what's going on inside you... You have talent.