The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Amen. Nicely written, I read the last paragraphs twice, to pick up those extra special messages. God bless ya, littlelight
07/26/05
Good relation to the reader.
An involving story! I like this line: "The plainness of her question hit my near-death heart like lightening, and I muffled a scream somewhere deep inside." Deep, heart-level stuff.