The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
This was a very good article. I loved the thoughts of preparation, and getting out of the comfort zone. It would have been much easier for me as a reader, if the paragraphs were spaced properly and separated though. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
A nice entry :) Try to separate your paragraphs to make it easier to read.
07/20/05
Break up the paragraphs and try to write without second person. Thanks for posting.
very interesting. Thanks for sharing
A agree with dub here, try to avoid the second person writing...would have been better had you described it in first person as though you were going through each thing. Otherwise a good read. Thanks for sharing!