The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this retelling of Paul's journey! Very clever idea, and well-written too.
Your retelling of the Bible story is outstanding. I enjoyed it very much.
I really enjoy Biblical fiction, and this was a good choice of story.

I was quite a bit "thrown" by the character of Marcus, who seems to be an African slave from the wrong century altogether.

Loved the introduction of the "political prisoner" at the end, and the redemption of your main character.
You have captured the emotions of all the people onboard very well. I like your story angle and the way you describe the details. Your ending for the story is a good closure to a whole new beginning for Demetrius.