The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, simply heartbreaking! I'm so glad that she was able to talk to her grandfather and get everything worked out. You did well with the atmosphere in this piece. ^_^
06/05/08
WOW! That was an amazing story. You really brought out the emotion of the piece. Very well written.
06/10/08
A lovely, evocative piece.
Great story to draw the reader in and keep them there. It brought tears to my eyes, well written.
~Ree~
Well deserved win!!!
I loved this piece-it fit the topic perfectly. I enjoyed the tender emotions in this.
06/12/08
Not only was this a beautiful story, the style in which it was delivered was a delight as well. Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
06/12/08
Congratulations - a well deserved win. :)