The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
Hi Great message - Thank you so much - excellent writing keep up the good work.
I love James! You have done a very nice job here. Thank you for sharing! To help us as readers, try breaking it up into smaller paragraphs. It makes it easier to read and more interesting! And focused was mispelled... but I loved your comparison to the photos and darkroom. Excellent.
03/10/08
This is a very nice devotional. You really spoke to my heart tonight. Thank you for sharing.
Laury
03/10/08
You've chosen a wonderful chapter for this topic--just before my daughter went through a horrible personal experience, she was led to memorize that chapter.

How about adding some personal anecdotes, to give this devotional "feet"?
I really liked the darkroom analogy. You have some great thoughts. I would have liked for you to elaborate and include more of your thoughts on this. Still, you did a great job. Keep on writing!