The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
That would be such a difficult decision!

There are some instances of switching back and forth from past to present tense, and some punctuation problems to resolve. Maybe a Challenge Buddy could help you out with those?

Thanks for this entry--it sure covers a situation that many people have to deal with. Keep writing!
02/21/08
Poor Betty! As Jan said above, you do have some errors that a challenge buddy could help you correct. I certainly hope you have a job now. Keep on writing!
Laury
As mentioned previously, there are some punctuation errors that make the writing a bit difficult to follow. These can be easily corrected though.

You did a good job, and I think most of us can relate to this story in some way. I hate having to job hunt. Keep writing!