The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/08
I like how realistic this exchange is - it gives hope to those of us who feel like we really don't know what we're saying when we share Christ. Keep writing.
01/21/08
This is very well written. It is a realistic scenario, but your descriptions and thought process made it come to life. Good job.
01/21/08
Your details are so realistic.(I love the ketchup bottle on the tip). Some may strain a little to see the topic, but I think it is there...just very subtle. Good writing~
01/22/08
You created setting of the truck stop atmostphere very well. Good job with the dialogue. I was hoping for an ending. What happened to Tom? Did he believe?
Good job...keep writing.