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11/02/07
Cute story--it taps into what might perhaps be a universal experience for those of us with children.

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The only problem with a sweet piece like this is that it really only has one possible ending, thus, no suspense for the reader. Nevertheless, this is quite charming.
Good piece. Hits the topic well. Shows the need both parents and children have to hear God's Word at their own levels. Hope to read more of your pieces. :)
11/05/07
Oh how well I remember the first-timers. It was always traumatic, but left alone by nervous parents, they always adjusted very well. Nicely done.
11/08/07
A warm little piece that reminds us parents of leaving our kid/s with others for the first time.