The Official Writing Challenge
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Good use of the topic, and the transition from anger to calm was nicely done. Your writing is very eloquent - I might suggest, tho, that your first sentence be shorter, so as to quickly grab the reader's attention. Good job on this entry; I could sense the Spirit's work in your MC and your writing. :) Cat
Great use of "patience" for the calm topic. I like that. Bus schedules--yes, that would cause MANY of us to NOT stay calm. I like your title too. Good thoughts.