The Official Writing Challenge
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Strange story, but I did like it. There was some awesomeness about it. Such a sad thing to be lost. This should really make one think before making choices. Thanks be to God for his mercy and longsuffering.
I liked this. There was familiarity to the situation but I was totally surprised by the disappearing river. I wanted to help them get back. You did a good job of pulling me into the story.
This is very good. A winner I suspect. Or at least it should be. Good job.