The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute story. A pleasant twist on young love. Good writing.
04/29/07
Cute, I really liked the ending.
04/30/07
Very sweet. I expected her to look like the picture, but was glad she didn't. Good job!
04/30/07
Very sweet. Wonderfully descriptive. Good writing!
I like this story very much. It's a unique idea and one a child might easily come up with. Good work & blessings on your writing future.