The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title perfectly suits this poignant and touching piece! The sadness of loss and the joyful hope of restoration are both beautifully portrayed in a few words. Thank you for sharing this!
This is beautifully written. It spans the range of emotions and touches the heart. Great job. I'd love to read more of your work!
Wonderful outlook. Heaven will bring it all back. Thanks for sharing.
You have done a great job of putting your emotions on paper, expressed in deep creative images. Coninue to write like this and expand upon those images and you will without doubt be moving up in no time.
The voice of God will echo first in the hollow of these ears and there will be no regrets. WOW! What a rebuke of the olde song "silence is golden". Can you imagine the sights--and sounds--in heaven?