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12/08/06
The ending of this is very powerful and I liked the contrast between the two types of preachers. I think this could be improved by tying together the beginning and end of the story but it was well written. Keep writing!
12/12/06
I really like your title! It intrigued me right off. The world is crying for authentic Christians and church leaders!

I do have a couple questions. In the second paragraph where it says "humble gentile lady" were you saying she was a non-Jew, or did you mean "gentle"?

Also, in the paragraph about the minister holding a revival, is there a word left out in the phrase "Take hold of the even that is within you"? It doesn't make sense to me, and I'm curious as to what he wanted the people to take hold of! :)

It was a thought-provoking article, and I thank you for sharing it with us!