The Official Writing Challenge
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A great ending to a well-written story. I don't think the italics were necessary for your dialogue, though. It already had quotation marks.
10/29/06
Excellent! I loved this story! What a wonderful testimony! Very nice work!
10/30/06
tremendous story. you capture your reader from the beginning and hold them all of the way through.