The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/06
Some very nice thoughts sewn together into a touching article. Keep writing!
Yes, nice thoughts. I wonder if you wanted it to be poetry or an article? You might make the lines smaller and more consistent if its meant to be poetry, otherwise make all the paragraphs flow in normal lines. It would make it easier to read. Good thoughts though. Keep working on your style.
This was light and lovely to read. Good flow and message. :)
11/02/06
nice, i liked it..