The Official Writing Challenge
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This was interesting-some spaces would make it easier to read though :)
10/19/06
I agree about the spacing, but I also enjoyed the story. Good work!
Great story. I can picture the faces of your buddies as they got caught!
You told your story with great enthusiasm and detail. I really enjoyed this. Thanks and keep writing.
10/23/06
Great story.