The Official Writing Challenge
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You have some good word pictures in this story from Mary's perspective. I liked especially her reflection of the little hands reaching to be picked up now being nailed to the cross. You got across how painful this was for Mary with that simple memory.
So real you painted Mary's memory and heart that I had to weep as I read it. Very very profound writing.
Beautiful, yet haunting picture. You have the gift of creating an image the impacts the reader.