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This is a heartrending story and I feel you gave your grandson something important to think about. Continue to pray for him and have faith God hears our every word. Thanks for a great read.
08/12/06
Wonderful story, grandparents can often touch the lives of their grandkids in special ways.
08/14/06
There were a couple grammar kinks, and "alright" should be "all right," but other than those picky things, this was great! It would probably work well in a young person's devotional or magazine. Good work!
Your story, which is very good, seems most centered on the imagery given in John gospel 19:26 "When Jesus therefore saw His mother, and the disciple whom He loved standing by, He said to His mother, "Woman, behold your son!" The difference from that point on is that instead of the son turning towards his 'grand' mother he turns away. It is saddening but it makes you want to read more!