The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Thank you for the smile you put on my face. I too am often one fry short of a happy meal and it is nice to be reminded that we often make things more complicated than they need to be. Remember Jesus told us to come as children!
03/15/05
Sweet story with a lure toward humbleness!
I would have liked to have seen this in more readable paragraphs but aside from that (hey my eyes and brain take awhile to react otherwise!) it was a quick paced and to the point read. Definitely enjoyed it!
03/16/05
Very nicely done and I liked this sentence in particular-ambition of a snail with an under-active thyroid.
03/17/05
good application of the topic