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TITLE: Over Before It's Begun
By Brenda LaVelle
03/02/09
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My enemies must beware that I am a holy child of the Lord, and He has already won the battle in the heavenly realm. I give them fair warning!
Over Before It's Begun 5/6/08

Harken unto my enemies
That I am Your Holy child.
Let them not be deceived
That they can conceive their wiles.

Tell them of Your protective hedge
Which You have placed around this one,
Of the favors to be granted
And the battles to be won.

Let them know they cannot proceed
Without Your intervention,
Because by Your swift hand above,
They will have Your full attention.

Their spoils are already taken
By the Almighty God Himself.
They will be left without one plea.
The Lord will take all their wealth.

The battle is over before
It's begun in the realm,
Because my Lord and my Savior
Has taken His place at the helm.

copyright 2008 by Brenda LaVelle

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