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TITLE: Dirty
By roj miedes
02/07/09
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must be dirty job
to gather dust and make them
into spitting
rock-throwing
caste-forming
living
dusts.

Must be dirty job still
to pick those dust and try to
wash them with blood.
Sticky, filthy.

It is crazy to
love those dusts-
We know that.
Can they love you back?
Dusts only know how to blind
hide, make dirty.


I cannot begin to comprehend how you saved me.
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