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TITLE: Honor-Bound
By Jason Collins
01/31/09
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Inspired by my father in law, yesterday he brought me a new bible. This one, he says, has highlighted the lords words, I read a bit, and felt someone or something close by.
To what do I owe this honor

You have bestowed on me?

I only ask because I feel

The weakening of my knees.



To wonder further would be a sin

It just seems surreal to me.

What can I do to show my thanks?

I am a simpleton you see.



Shall I dance or maybe sing for you

Or fetch some wine and cheese

Or maybe paint a scenic view

Your mountains, your frightful seas?



Please tell me sir, I beg you so

Please show me what you need.

All I have, I owe to you

Shall I plow and sow some seed?



What can I do for you?

What is it you want from me?

Do I need to help someone?

Shall I cook some kind of feast?



Oh my, Oh lord, Great king of mine

What could I possibly do for thee?

I beg of you, please tell me whilst

I am here upon my knees.



I feel so weak, so full of debt.

I will do anything great or small

I hear your words, It will be done

I will spread the word to all.



Jason Collins 1-30-09
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