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TITLE: My Rescue
By Raymond Alberts
01/09/09
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This poem is to give honor and praise to my Lord Jesus Christ.
My Rescue

As softly as on angel’s wings,
the spirit comes to me.
And opens up a pathway
For my blinded eyes to see

A warmth within like sunshine,
He fills my heart and soul.
Driving out the fears and pain,
That makes my life so cold.

I go to Him on bended knee,
He hears my every prayer.
When I enter in my closet,
I find him waiting there.

I bring to him my problems,
I bring to him my cares.
I ask him for forgiveness.
For my weakness, always there.

He reassures me gently;
“I will never forsake you child.
Through times and trials ahead of you,
I am with you all the while.”


Thank you Jesus for the sunshine,
The wind the rain and snow.
Through all the times and seasons,
You are with us all we know.
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