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TITLE: When life does'nt feel right
By carmen quiros
04/20/05
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This poem is for all the lonely people, who think they are realy alone, truth is your not!
These words are for those who have lost all hope
for those who on some given day lost their soul
for those who feel things just cant get any worst
and for all those who believe they're in need of rest

Here are some things for you to think about
when times are hard and you cant find a way out
When life seems to be blameing all things on you
When you push the clouds and cant find your way thru

There are times on Earth, we seem to roam aimlessly
and as we do, we find that gravity pulls on us endlessly
Even the smiles we once had , have turned into frowns
While we struggle in silence and there's no friend to be found

As you read this, listen to the reasoning voice within
There is hope where you thought there was only sin
There is a soul deep inside waiting to be redeemed
There is a place where living waters flow down a stream

There is an enormous Heaven where God's justice bravails
and all those who blamed and hurt you, will find an eternal jail
He will find a place for you in his home were living feels right
Where gravity will no longer hold you down and he is the light

God holds one promise in particualr for every Man,Woman and Child
Proclaime that Jesus Christ is Lord and King and confess it out loud
Then he will always be with you, so when life on Earth seems unfair
Look to the skies, call on the name of his son Jesus and he will be there!

Carmen Irizarry Quiros
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