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TITLE: What the world should be
By Kara P
07/30/08
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Don't you wish, there was a place
Where you could just run free?
To be at a place, with no crime
and just go out and be?

Where the clouds pass by, and there is no risk
of ever being shot?
Or you yourself, have no danger
of getting raped as a tot?

It is far fetched, yes i know
But I wish that this could be.
Now think of this, Go over it well.....
This is what the world should be.
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