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TITLE: Hearts Smile
By Ruth Patton
07/02/08
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This is written when I truly knew that God loves us no matter what stage we are at.
My heart was in so much pain
Until I looked to you
I felt so sad and lonely
Until you helped me through

I heard your voice talking
You were calling my name

"Stay with me, follow me
I will take your pain
I am always with you
I am forever by your side
I will take your burdens
You no longer have to hide
Just grab hold of my hand
And I will guide your way
If you fall down, I'll pick you up
And comfort you each day
It is a long road to walk
But I will lead you on
I'll be with you every step you take
And I will never be gone"

I thank you Lord for waiting
Though it took me a while
To realize what I needed
To make my heart truly smile
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