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TITLE: Sunday Church massacre
By naomi blake
05/09/08
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This is the Prologue for my story Preacher I changed most of it from the first draft.
Hundreds of people streamed into the 5 biggest churchs in the U.S. that Sunday. Nobody noticed the new faces in the crowds. For years now Christians all around the globe had persicutedbut nobody could have imagined what happened this fateful day. As they sang their vocies ringing from the ceiling. Shoots echoed off the ceiling, poeple turned to run only to find their exits cut off by more gunman, they showed no mercy killing around 1102 men, women, and children. The world was stunned but just when they thought that it couldn't get any worse. Copycats started springing up up all around the world. Eventually Christians were forced to hold secret churches. The world began to believe that the christian religion was dead but somethings, you just can't kill.
Two years after that fateful day strange people dressed in all white except for their black hoods. They stood on corners preaching God's word and handing out newsletters to people. They became known as preachers. Risking their lives, they told the world what it needed to here. But, once agian they are being hunted by an unknown group. A constant struggle rages as each side try's to win a falling world. Secret murders, deception, faith, and courage this is the world that Alex finds herself in.
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