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TITLE: You're with Me
By Ricky Flowers
03/19/08
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You’re with Me
By Ricky Flowers

In the wind, I hear your whisper
Words soothing and so kind
Gently pushing me forward
So I won’t be left behind

In the sand, I see your footprints
Not in front and not in back
But walking right beside me
So I won’t begin to slack

In nature, I see your handiwork
Immeasurable in its beauty
Reminding me how awesome you are
And that to you, I have a duty

In space, I see your infiniteness
And to know you did it all
Makes me know that you are there
If I will only hear your call

In the ocean’s, I see your power
It’s that power that moves me on
To face an uncertain future
Where this could all be gone

In all these things, I realize
The same God created me
Beautiful in his sight
Just like the Willow Tree

In the wind, I hear your whisper
And a tear comes to my eye
I know now that you’re with me
Until the day I die
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