THE CRITIQUE CIRCLE
BACK TO
CRITIQUE CIRCLE
INSTRUCTIONS
COMPLETE
INSTRUCTIONS HERE
CRITIQUE GUIDELINES
CRITIQUE TIPS
HELP TOUR
1) You start with one credit so post your first piece of 1,000 words or less.

2) Receive critiques over a few weeks.

3) Read guidelines and critique another writer and earn 1 credit to post another 1,000 word or less piece.


4) Build up credits now by giving more critiques to be used at another time.
YOUR CREDITS
LOGIN HERE


ATTENTION:
Effective 8-27-15 submissions are now limited to 1,000 words or less and to a maximum of four submissions per month per member. See message to left for information.

TITLE: Only He
By Brenda LaVelle
02/26/08
  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND
This poem is about answering the call of Jesus and letting Him walk you to "the other side." It was written as an offering of comfort and assurance to a friend of mine who is dying of cancer and dedicated to him.
Only He
by Brenda LaVelle
Free to share

Only He 2/13/08

Only He
Can lift the weight
Call you in
Open the gate

He wants your all
No less, no more
Give it to Him
Then close the door

Once, when safely
Within His fold
You will never need
Silver or gold

For He will provide
For your every need
With you humbly walk
Gently lead

Follow Him onward
Let Him be your Guide
And He will bring you
To the other side

Where the Father awaits you
With open arms
And never again
Will you meet with harm

(Dedicated to Ahmet Semratedu)
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.