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TITLE: I have a Man
By Leonardo Lockett
03/15/05
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To the open minded people
I have a man who I love dearly

He treats me good even when I am not good
He is such a great and awesome lover to me

This man is one of a kind
Nobody can understand why he love like he does
But he is my man

I love man with all my heart

This is my superman because he is the super in the natural

Many people do not like it because he love me and I love him

I have a man who I with die for at anytime
Because this man has already done it for all of us
You ask who is this man?

He is not the Pope or the President or a natural man

He is a King of Kings

And a Lord of Lords

You say I am crazy to love this man

But I say I am what I am

I am a man who love a man name Jesus Christ

This is my Man a Fishman of men
And great a lover to us all
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