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TITLE: Lil' Child's Heart
By C L
01/26/08
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A sweet poem about a newborn baby and how special they are. I do not have a baby yet, but this is what I think of them, precious and full of love.
Lil' child's heart,
Lovin' kindness,
Sweetened loveliness,
Creative joyfulness,
Living wonderfulness,
Lil' child's heart,

Lil' heart of a child,
Pounds slowly,
Small hand reaches out,
Fingers hold tight,
Tightly closed eyes,
Rosy red cheeks,
Newborn lips,
Tiny fingernails,
Wispy golden hair,
Fragile heart,
Sweet sunshine filled,
Lil' heart of a child,

Lil' child's heart,
Beats as I sing,
Lil' child's heart,
Full of potential,
Lil' child's heart,
Brand new to the world,
Lil' child's heart,
Forever with God,
Lil' child's heart,
Loving and learning,
God's lil' heart of a child.
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