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TITLE: WHY
By Mario Paolo Escoderos
12/07/07
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Just asking why!!!
“WHY?”

No matter how hard I try
I just can’t get you out of my mind
I’ve tried to forget things that reminds me of you
But it is your name that follows me through

I’ve tried to let you go
But deep inside of me
Your presence still lingers
In my mind, in my heart

Your name is already carve
Piece of me longs for you
I can’t stop myself to think about you
Why? I feel this way?

Why? It has to be this way?
Every single day I want to see you
From a distance, here looking at you
Afraid that you will know

That I’m always dreaming of you
Every time our eyes meet
It means everything to me
Some things is just hard to figure out

Things came unexpectedly
That caught you surprisingly
And all you can say is…
“WHY?”
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