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TITLE: "Here I Am
By Mario Paolo Escoderos
12/07/07
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Thoughts of mine... your critiques are very welcome!! thanks for reading!!
God bless you all!
“Here I Am”

I don’t know what to do
Staring blankly into nowhere
Feel the temperature rising
Walking under the heat of the sun

Left all alone on this road
Trying to fix myself
And there you are
Someone I call friend

You do everything
To make me smile
You see me through
My ups and downs

Though I’m confused
You never fail me
You’ve walked with me
Through this path of life

Many times I failed You
Still You accept me
Although I betray You
Still You forgave me

I could not ask for more
When I’m with You
“JESUS”
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