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TITLE: He simply took my hand
By Paul Posney
03/03/05
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I met a man today
he spoke to me of the Christ.
He said; “Open your heart, let him come in,
he gave for you his life.”
He sang some songs, we talked a bit,
he took my hand in prayer
He prayed; “Dear Lord, Please help this man
show him your love is there."
Now, I’ve never been religious,
or given much thought to sin
But there at that very moment
I felt something in me begin.
After he left, I sat right down
to write out what I feel
What I felt; within my heart
was to me, the Christ is real.
So thanks to you Lord Jesus,
For bringing to me this man.
He brought you and I together….
by simply taking my hand!

© Paul A. Posney
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