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TITLE: "FAILURE"
By Mario Paolo Escoderos
08/08/07
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"The fear of the Lord is the beginning of knowledge, fools despise wisdom and instruction."
Proverbs 1:7

well depending on our own self is leading us astray but to depend fully on God we can do all things with wisdom and knowledge.. i just want to share with you this simple thought of mine..
hope you enjoy it!!.. Godbless you all!!
“FAILURE”

I thought I get it right
I thought I am right
I just thought
But I am wrong

It’s just only a deception
I trust fully on myself
Depending on my own
But I am a failure Lord, I failed you

I thought I’m gonna be happy
All the while I’m expecting
Only to be frustrated by the results
I thought I’ve worked so hard

I thought I’ve given my best
I thought you’re with me
I thought you were by my side
Yes, you’re there watching me

Watching me fall
I thought I am strong
Just to realized I am weak
I thought I’ve learned enough

Just to see myself stumbled
Teaching me to depend more on you
You open my eyes
And let me see my failures
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