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TITLE: "A Nigth with You"
By Mario Paolo Escoderos
07/17/07
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its just..... a night i spent with someone whom i want to be with.....for ng skyut this one is for you... Godbless you always!! and I love you...
“A Night with You”


There’s so many stars in the sky, each of them are unique but only one can stand out among them all. You couldn’t touch it. But you can reach it if you only focus your eyes on it. Stars whether big or small still they glint in the sky. Each of them has its own purpose. They scattered everywhere in the sky. But every one of them has its own perfect place. Even though stars are few tonight still their beauty is beyond compare. They can’t move from its place but it is amazing to see them in different views. Co’z stars are out sometimes, do you ever wonder where they gone? Or you might think that they’ve fallen away? Also in life, there is night that your sky is filled with stars. There are times also that it is dark and empty. Summer time is just ended. It’s now time for rainy seasons. The sky is full of dark clouds. All you can see is darkness. As the clouds continue to fill up the sky, the greater chance to rain. Looking from a distance you’ve got nowhere to go. As the rain pours, all you can hear is the sound of raindrops falling on the rooftop. You’ve got nowhere to run. Rain that washes away the earth, put out the fire and destroys iron is the same rain that makes you cold and shiver. But still you hold on co’z there is an eternal flame that burns deep inside of you that sustaining the light. Just like stars hiding those dark clouds. Never lose hope co’z in every storm that come there is a clear and bright sky waiting. They are always there through the storm. Even though shadows darken your way still you have that serenity in your heart. Knowing that there is someone who sees you through the storm, holding your hands during your dark hours. There’s a hand that wipe away when tears keep on falling. An ear that listen when you cry out. A still voice in the silence. A sweet little sound that echoes stirring up your heart telling you to hold on when everything fails. When the world turns against you. Teaching you to trust, to let go all your fears. Daring you to move, to open your eyes and meditate in your heart. To let you know that you are not alone co’z I am here with you. I will never leave you. Co’z you’ve been a part of me. As the night grew deeper its now time to keep these thoughts. A time to lay this restless mind. For tomorrow is waiting. Leaving this night as a part of memory. The night I spent with you.
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