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TITLE: The Light House
By Janice Presson
06/17/07
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As ships passings in the night we are.
Each with our courses laid out by far.
Compass geared so as not to wonder
from our highways of the sea.
Many vessels lay shipwrecked
for straying off their given destiny.
Thus leaving useless empty containers
that was once a Captains dream
but now broken by storms that were unseen.
Lose not sight of your port of call
or change the direct that was given to all,
for only disaster lies at the end.
Stay lineal taking not an uncharted route
but if so search for the light house.
They guide ships in
warning of dangers hidden.
Beacons of light you will see
follow the lights to home and safety.
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