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By Mario Paolo Escoderos
06/15/07
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I wrote this stuff when the times i feel so empty and I don't know what to do.. and realize that I have nothing to fear co'z He is with me.. In times I feel alone, loneliness cannot overcome me.. co' Im happy being wiht his precence... Hope you like it!... Thanks a lot... Godbless you all!
Sometimes I don't know what to do

But when I think of You

I just close my eyes and I see You

It’s nice to hear your voice

Calling out my name

Sometimes I wonder how I got this far

I have found peace in You

You made my life complete with You

The sacrifice You've made

That sets me free

Now that I have found You

I will never let You go

I put my trust in You

I gave my life to You

It’s your embrace I long for

Co’z all I want is to be with You

Everyday, I’m gonna sing to You

“I LOVE YOU”
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