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TITLE: Seeds of Knowledge
By kathleen palma
05/26/07
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This poem is about the seeds of knowledge that God has planted seeds in all humanity, the weeds are the bad thoughts that kill the seeds, (the good thoughts) the seeds need to be nourished with love and when the garden is in bloom the knowledge is to be shared with all mankind.
Where does your garden grow oh Lord,
in the valleys or on the hills.
Surrounded by your majesty,
placed upon the window sills.

Can you see them from the heavens,
when you gaze upon the earth.
Did youy plant the seeds for us oh lord,
before our time of birth.

Oh child of mine, with-in you,
is where my garden grows.
I sowed my seeds into mankind,
When nourished knowledge grows.

Among the seeds are many weeds,
that need to be desroyed.
Indeed they'll need alot of light,
if their to be enjoyed.

Feed them daily with constant love,
they can not get enough.
It will strengthen them and kill the weeds,
my seeds are very tough.

When your garden overflows,
and your flowers are in bloom.
They are to be given to mankind,
for my children to consume.
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