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TITLE: Glare
By roj miedes
05/24/07
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Wisdom grows by watering. Be generous with your wells and fountains...Thanks a lot, folks.
My face contorted
And forced to bow down

Not much because
of the glaring afternoon sun that
taunts my weak eyes
and tried to slap the color
back in my pallid, uncovered face

but because of the
silent contempt that
I saw, in shadows,
in the eyes
of a friend I lost
by staring too much
to the sky.
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