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TITLE: Dream Team
By Monica Raye Daly
04/18/07
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ride your dream horse
DREAM TEAM.

Walking peaceful in a meadow,
No pressure today we ride bare back.
The warm sun smiling a quiet hello,
We find most relaxing an easy nap.

Trotting through green canopy trail,
Posting easily along the way.
A quiet swishing of the bays tail.
A continues hoof beat under sun ray.

Canter up a steep incline hill,
Excitement to hold as we reach for summit.
We arrive at the top oh what a thrill.
With a happy tune can’t help but hum it.

Pounding hooves on sandy beaches,
Tumbling waves roll in to shore.
White shirt and black breaches,
I dream to ride a bay horse once more.

I have no horse no barn or stall,
But nothing can stop me as I dream.
For in my mind I keep it all,
Together bay and I are quite a team.

Monica Raye Daly
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