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TITLE: The Signs
By kathleen palma
02/23/07
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It is not a sound you can hear or vision to behold, it is te miracle with in us, that can may guide us on the road.

The flesh is given to the spirit, as it emerges with the world, a flame of hope, our inner light, our connection to our lord.

He will not forsake us, not for a moment, for we are his temple, where he dwells. he sacraficed to give us light in our darkened human shells.

His call is a gentle knowing, a feeling of what is true, knowledge deep with in us, persistant on getting through.

The spirit can not control us, it can be trampled by our will, lying await in darkness, for the spirit can't be killed.

As pain alerts the flesh, so does the spirit do the same, for it is sadness and eternal mourning, that creates the flicker from the flame.

Do not look for signs from nature, for what our future holds, nor what science can reveal, for what only the spirit can unfold.

Our fate lies with in us, only the truth can set us free, for we have the power with in us there is nothing we can't see.
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