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TITLE: One Women One God
By Sonya Bennett
02/11/07
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I was alone one day thinking of an way that I could maybe help someone get through something so hard that it could leave you stared for life both in mind and soul so this is it, what god wants me to contribute to someone out there.
That might be crying out for help and I hope this is you and secondly i hope you are listening to what i am saying, God Loves You I love you and you must love yourself enough just leave and don't ever look back!YOU ARE BLESSED*
Funny how that man I feared on the streets was you all along. More feared by me then any other rappist,robber or killer. And I realize now that it was always you. The man I'ld sworned to love, and who I thought, loved me.As you proclaimed to me once. While even now I can still feel your 123 Punch that sook cold my heart. However It could be said that your words were real and rung true,as your treats were an difiant part of you. As they becamed an every day occurance in my life. But wow, I did not know this was how you would treat your wife.As this was an time I could not Phatom.An time I thought I loved him so! And did not know I could take no more!But if I could ask you one thing, this is what it would be.Why did you hate me so? Was it because I would not go,becamed your personal doormate.And while there, in the darkness, I cried and cried, til I could cry no more. And there it would seemed hidden in the recesses of my mind as I watched the days slowly crepted into night,the hrs slowly camed and went. I would remember this Because that was when you would strick. Becomeing my tormenter rather then my lover as you felled my heart with pain.And how I had made an promise that I would always be there til the end. And foolishly I fought, to win that love in vein. All this while your effections for me were an no show, as your pounches to me delt an cruel blow. For even now I could still hear your streams over and over in my dreams.And for my kids one by one I begun to loose, because respect for me, they could not choose. I think looken back now on the way things were,I knew that was when I had to leave. In hopes of their love I would retreive.For as I am no longer your victim, and have paid the price, let me say this to you now.It is only because I do beleave in that higher power that is him. And No, this does not mean you.As I will pray that someday I could forgive much. But for now my freind I'll be in touch!But know this God still loves you no matter what...
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