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TITLE: On Solid Ground
By kathleen palma
02/08/07
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Its not the battles that you have lost on your journey it is is making it to the finish
I have climbed the stairs to heaven, too many times to count.
I have battled many demons, in my world of the lost and found.
There were times I have made it to the top, all I needed was a helping hand.
To pull me to perfection, but I could not seem to stand.
I stumbled back a step or two, and have fallen to the ground.
I told myself I had fought to hard, and I will not lose this round.
So I stood back up and wiped away my tears, then proceeded to the top.
But fear had caused me to look back, to recognize the drop.
Overwhelmed and startled, my legs began to shake, I lost my footing once again but realized my mistake.
Look straight ahead, do not look back, kept playing in my head, it was not through truth, but fear and doubt in which I was being led.
I continue to climb to solid ground,I am still searching for the door, and yes many battles have been lost but I will not lose this war.
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