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TITLE: My Fairy Tale
By kathleen palma
02/08/07
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In the corner, in the chair behind Cinderella, I once lived there.
In the darkness I cried for sight I cried for hope I cried for light.
I watched her enter I watched her leave, happily ever she received.
Yet I stood unnoticed against the wall, why did my prince not hear my call.
I felt obscure I felt unseen, I gave up hope I lost my dream.
Will there be no end to this, deprived am I, my hope dismissed.
I cried out in pain with all my might, just then appeared my prince in white.
We soared above a rainbow throne, in a carriage made of precious stone.
Before us stood these gates of pearl, with glistening colors not of this world.
I felt emotions I did not know emerged in light from head to toe.
My thoughts appeared unspoken words, I realized my thoughts were heard.
My body seemed to float in space, to soar trough time at a rapid pace.
I have received my once upon a time,and happily ever after is now mine.
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