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TITLE: The sacred rainbow
By kathleen palma
02/07/07
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a poem about forgiveness made in a promise
After the tears fall down
to the ground
in the sky full of beauty
a promise is found
a reminder from God
a forgiveness to man
though their sins
can destroy them
the earth will still stand
from the days of Noah
when the covenant was made
through the days
of our savior
and the price that
he paid
he is keeping his promise
and the spirits will
rejoice
when he opens the heavens
and the earth takes
its coarse
when the lights of our savior
unite becomes one
when the spirits are lifted
straight up to the
son
the colors of love
compassion and grace
which once was our promise
will then be
our race
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