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TITLE: Finest to the least
By kathleen palma
02/07/07
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Behold the stars
and every grain of sand
is counted by our lord
from the finest to the least
may receive the same
reward
for his spirit and his royalty
runs deep with in our veins
he will not lose a single
link
of his royal precious chain
Gods sight is not
of human eyes
there is no limit
to his view
his connection
to the human soul
brings fourth his spirit
through
the spirit unites the
children
unknown by human eyes
unable to see past
human flesh
unable to realize
riches of the world
are not of any
gain
for when the children
are returned
worldly things will remain
there is no flesh of color
no languages to speak
no possessions
to be carried
only memories to keep
for in the eyes of strangers
of every heart that beats
is our brothers
and our sisters
the finest to the least
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