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TITLE: Come to Me
By SHANEIL HARADA
11/19/06
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This is actually more of a song.
All ye who are weary...Come to me
All ye heavy laden...Crawl to me
All ye who are fearful...Run to me
All ye who are tearful...Cry to me

Bring me your worries...Bring me your fears.
Bring me your burdens...And all your tears.
I am the one who...won't lie to you.
The only one who...would die for you.

I'll take your worries...And all of your fears.
I'll lift your burdens...And I'll dry your tears.
I took your shame...The cost for your sin.
I'll take your pain...And make you new again.
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